Moriah Leila

First of all, I just want to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. Your descriptions are very detailed and I often felt like I was actually in ...

This was hilarious!! So I didn't read too much of the other reviews, but it looked like Master Yoda did a good job. However, I am going to review this, ...

I know this review is WAY overdue, and I do apologize for the long delay. My internet has been shut off for several months, but it is back in commission. ...

I just happened to stumble upon this piece and I am so glad I did. It is FANTASTIC. However, I do have several suggestions. The Holy Grail pub was smoky ...

Okay, so I'll get the little nitpicky stuff out of the way first. Then I'll cover stuff like character development, description of the setting, and my overall opinion on the ...

Again, I'm not very good at critiquing poetry, but I'm finding the more I do it for you, the more enjoyable it becomes. All the same this is going to ...

I'm trying to raise my point count since it just got reset to 300. = ( Anywho, I'm going to be brief and rather frank so please do not be ...

A gentle roar seemed to hold the Southern Dock hostage. It was abnormally busy, and people were scattered in all directions. I love the way you open a chapter, always ...

I'm not very good at critiquing poetry, so I apologize, I guess I should have stated that. My favorite poems were #2 and #5. I liked the approach you took ...

It was a dark night, one of the darkest of them all. It is on this kind of nights when these things happen. We moved through the night as silently ...

I didn't get a chance to read what everyone else wrote, so you'll have to forgive me if I repeat something that has already been covered. Shall we? People never ...

I really don't like a preamble so I am just going to get right into the review. We rolled through the piles of garbage and hit the table. There was ...

Most everything has been covered for this chapter but I did have one thing to point out that I don't think anyone else picked up. I sat up and walked ...

Hey, I'm here again...Are you ready? Here we go... The sheet that Panatar had placed over his face to shield his eyes from dust had not worked as well as ...

I will do nitpicks, which trust me, there aren't too many, and then I will be more thorough with Characters, Setting, and Overall. The boy leaning against her desk was ...